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Cogito ergo sum:
I think, therefore I am.
Those neurons that fire
Chemicals across synaptic clefts
Are the reasons I think,
I breathe, I exist.

Afferent
I sense the world around me.
Efferent
I move, I react, I do.
It is firings of that mass of neurons,
That make me who I am.

If one were to lobotomize
That crucial frontal lobe,
Who would I be
But a living breathing shell
Bland, without personality,
And not me?

Amygdala,
I fear.
Broca’s, Wernicke,
I speak.
It is this brain that directs me,
In life’s vital functions.

No one dares to deny
That I am odd, different.
But I happen to like my
Unusual tendencies,
For without them,
“I” does not exist.
©2007-2009 ~blondeandbrilliant
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Author's Comments

I am a nerd with a passion for neurology. There are a lot of people who probably will not get all the scientific references, and this was a bit self-indulgent, but oh well. I hope it didn't cloud the whole point that from my brain comes my personality, and my personality makes me me. But whatever. I wrote it, so I post it.

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:iconvenaeli:
Hmm.... there is a wavelength out there, it seems. Very lovely, despite the harsh jutting of the lobotomy mention.
:iconwasus:
lol that was awsome i loved it you are very very good

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Why be someone else when you being you is the best thing that ever happened to me?
:icondamnedlostsoul:
this is pretty good... word choice is awesome...

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in the midst of a thousand drops of red, a howl was heard from his beaten wrists...

insanity has set in...

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What being jobless means..
:iconblondeandbrilliant:
Thanks!

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"Wow, that's brilliant!"

"You sound surprised."
:iconspriglief:
I usually condemn I'ism, but in this poem it is strength, since your defense of yourself is also a defense of everybody who is different. I enjoyed your defense of you.
:iconblondeandbrilliant:
Thank you!

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"Wow, that's brilliant!"

"You sound surprised."
:iconnawkaman:
This is good, very solid. You have a great economy of language in this, which makes it read much more powerfully. Nothing is wasted, and every word adds to the purpose of the poem. The only crit I have would be that you should be careful of word repetition. It's hard, in a case like this. I can't really ask you to find another way to say 'neuron.' But still, you should be wary of having the same word crop up more than once or twice in a short space.
:iconblondeandbrilliant:
You are quite right, and I try to do that as much as I can, but, as you said, there is very often not many options in finding synonyms for some words, much to my despair.

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"Wow, that's brilliant!"

"You sound surprised."
:icongensougan:
Smells like teen spirit.

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I can't keep thinking I was right.
You know why yesterday was a lie.

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